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Looking for critique on animation test + rig I made

Posted by Trilobiteproductions - 8 hours ago


Hi so I’m looking to hear y’all’s thoughts on this animation test I made using this rig I well.. also made.

I’m eager to hear y’all’s feedback, thanks! :)

https://www.newgrounds.com/projects/movies/6643285/preview


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ok, I'm gonna try to critique it, and keep in mind, IDK how to animate. One, the girl moves Very Robotically. Her arm moves in a way impossible for humans to do. And her eyes look dead straight, no blinking, no emotion shown, just a dead stare. I guess that might also be another issue, no emotion is shown on her face, it's like an animated mannequin. Her mouth doesn't close, and she always has this smile, with the white void behind it. I would suggest trying to draw out each frame (as painful as that sounds), as your art looks much better than this animation, in any other context, I would of assume they were from different people. That's all I have to say, in short, try to add a bit more life into the animation. Hope this doesn't sound rude.

Oh don’t worry I got experience with like regular animation too I just wanted to test out rigged animation more for a change and yea in the future I’ll make the characters look more emotional.
Thanks! 8)